Question

【題目】假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞。

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

These day, people break traffic rules and littered everywhere. It does serious harm with our life. I think people should make a effort to change this situation.

As for him, I will bear traffic rules in mind. If I ride a bike, I’ll never cross a road until the traffic light turn green. If I walk, I will forget to use the zebra crossing. Meanwhile, I will make it as my duty to help keep our environment clean or healthy. I will help clean up the roadside litter whenever possibly. I hope my behavior will make a difference.

Answer 1

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【解析】1.day改為days

考查名詞復(fù)數(shù)。根據(jù)前面的these 可知day要用復(fù)數(shù)，故用days.

2.littered改為litter

考查謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。people break traffic rules and litter everywhere .break 和 litter是并列的謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞，故也要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。主語(yǔ)是people，故.littered改為litter

3.with改為to

考查固定搭配。do harm to …對(duì)……造成傷害。故.with改為to。

4.a改為an

考查不定冠詞。名詞effort是元音開(kāi)頭的，要用不定冠詞an.,故a改為an。

5.him改為me

考查人稱代詞。從As for him, I will bear traffic rules in mind.中可知，主語(yǔ)是我，所以him要改為me.

6.turn 改為turns

考查謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。本句子I’ll never cross a road until the traffic light turn green.中的turn的主語(yǔ)是the traffic light，是單數(shù)，故要用turns.

7.添加never/not

考查否定句。上文：至于我，我會(huì)記住交通規(guī)則的。如果我騎自行車(chē)，直到交通燈變成綠色，我才過(guò)馬路。可推斷出“如果我步行，我決不會(huì)忘記走斑馬線”因此要用否定式。故添加never/not.

8.刪去as

考查連詞。Meanwhile, I will make it as my duty to help keep our environment clean本句中it是形式賓語(yǔ)，真正的賓語(yǔ)是后面的動(dòng)詞不定式，所以as 是多余的，故要?jiǎng)h去as。句意：我會(huì)盡我的責(zé)任來(lái)幫助保持我們的環(huán)境清潔。

9.or 改 為 and

考查并列連詞。是保持環(huán)境的清潔和健康。是并列關(guān)系。故要or 改 為 and

10.possibly改為possible

考查形容詞。I will help clean up the roadside litter whenever（it is ）possibly只要有可能，我就幫忙清理路邊的垃圾。從句意可知whenever從句中省略了it is ,possible作從句的表語(yǔ)，故possibly改為possible。