Question

【題目】閱讀下面短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。

Peppa Pig

An upcoming film's trailer(預(yù)告片)has garnered huge attention on China's social media platforms, with many netizens dubbing the short video as the "best commercial video of 2019".

The 5-minute trailer is advertising the upcoming animated film Peppa Celebrates Chinese New Year, which revolves around the question "Who is Peppa?" and tells a touching story that highlights Chinese families.

In the beginning, a senior man named Li Yubao living in a remote rural area asked his grandson on the phone what gifts he wanted for the Spring Festival, but only heard the word "Peppa" due to the poor mobile signal. Therefore, the man begins an interesting journey to discover who Peppa is.

With the help of neighbors, the senior got closer to the answer, created a Peppa Pig model using metals and his own intuition, and surprised his grandson.

At the end of the story, the man found out Peppa was a cartoon figure and enjoyed the film with the whole family during the holiday season.

（寫作內(nèi)容）

1. 請用30個單詞概述上文主要內(nèi)容。

2. 請用120個詞寫出:

(1)這個廣告預(yù)告片的意義?

(2)談?wù)劄槭裁蠢夏耆讼Ｍ�孩子�；丶铱纯匆约拔覀兡贻p人該做點(diǎn)什么。

（寫作要求）

1. 寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句；

2. 作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；

（評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)） 內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。

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Answer 1

【答案】A film’s trailer which told a moving story about a senior man from remote rural area making a Peppa Pig model for his grandson made a hit.

The commercial short video encourages people working outside to come back home often and accompany family members to spend a happy and warm Spring Festival holiday, as family bonds play an irreplaceable role in Chinese people's daily lives.

In modern society, which is filled with intensive competition, young men have to work hard so as to forget their parents’ lives. Actually, parents understand their children so much and don’t have so many requirements for them. They just want to have a chat with their children to share the sorrow and happiness in the life, or staying with their children to express silent intimate relationship.

No matter how busy young men are, we should pay more attention to parents’ feeling and life. Therefore, as children of parents, we should suffice their few wishes. Once we are free from work, refuse some social activities, spare time to visit them, talk with them and accompany them. If we visit parents frequently, care more about them, I believe they will feel less loneliness and the world will be full of harmonious atmosphere with love.

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)是讀寫任務(wù)，要求概述一個廣告片并發(fā)表自己的看法。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本文要求概述一個廣告片并發(fā)表自己的看法：1. 請用30個單詞概述上文主要內(nèi)容。2. 請用120個詞寫出:(1)這個廣告預(yù)告片的意義?(2)談?wù)劄槭裁蠢夏耆讼Ｍ�孩子�；丶铱纯匆约拔覀兡贻p人該做點(diǎn)什么。時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如；moving (感人的)；remote（遙遠(yuǎn)的），Peppa Pig model（小豬佩奇模型），encourage（鼓勵），accompany （陪伴），Spring Festival （春節(jié)），family bond（家庭紐帶），irreplaceable（不可替代的），intensive（激烈的），competition（競爭），requirement（要求），harmonious（和諧的）及loneliness（孤獨(dú)）等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持卷面的整潔美觀。

本文內(nèi)容完整，層次分明，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確。另外全文中沒有中國式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的能力。