Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是李華，校英文報舉行題為“我最喜歡的幽默大師---卓別林”的征文比賽，請你投稿參賽。

要點(diǎn)：

1.簡要介紹卓別林；

2.談?wù)勀阆矚g他的原因。

要求：行文流暢，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，字?jǐn)?shù)100左右。

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Answer 1

【答案】Charlie Chaplin, master of nonverbal humor, was born into a poor family. When he was young, his father died, leaving the family even worse off. Therefore, Charlie had to take the responsibility to care for his mother and brother. Even if he led a hard life, he managed to brighten the life of other people and created many famous characters, such as the little tramp, who encouraged many people in need.

The reasons why I like Chaplin best are listed as follows. Firstly, he worked hard to achieve his dream. Secondly, he had a sense of humor and was good at making a bad situation entertaining. What’s more, his attitude towards life and determination to overcome difficulties always inspire me whenever I am in trouble.

In general, I have learnt a lot from Charlie Chaplin.

【解析】這是一篇人物類命題作文。聯(lián)系題干，以此為中心內(nèi)容進(jìn)行選材�？忌�在寫這篇文章時，要注意以下幾點(diǎn)：

1.要分析題干，圍繞題干進(jìn)行選材，在寫作思路方面，題目要求寫幽默大師卓別林，所以我們可以將他的外形、性格還有代表作簡要介紹一下。

2.要點(diǎn)要齊全，將題目要求的內(nèi)容羅列完整，重點(diǎn)對他進(jìn)行簡要介紹并列明喜歡他的主要原因，要注意層次結(jié)構(gòu)，注意上下文的銜接。

3.注意時態(tài)與語態(tài)，全文以一般現(xiàn)在時為主，描述第三人時要注意動詞形態(tài)的使用。

【范文亮點(diǎn)】

1.文章采用了“have to do sth不得不做某事”“ take the responsibility擔(dān)待”“manage to do設(shè)法做某事”“the reason why所以”等高頻短語。

2.文章采用了“Therefore、In general、What’s more、Even if”等連接詞使文章更加層次，連貫通順。

3. who encouraged many people in need，在句中，出現(xiàn)了who引導(dǎo)的定語從句。