Question

1．假設(shè)你叫李明，你的初中同學(xué)王強到貴陽讀高中，他來信告訴你，他的英語跟不上那里學(xué)生的英語水平，
課堂上聽不懂，不知道怎樣才能提高英語，希望你給他提些有關(guān)英語學(xué)習(xí)的建議．現(xiàn)在請你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示給他寫一封回信．
要點如下：
1．對他在英語學(xué)習(xí)方面有困難表示關(guān)心，并愿意提供幫助．
2．給他提出建議：①每天背單詞、短語，豐富詞匯量；②多聽英語錄音或光盤，模仿準(zhǔn)確的語音語調(diào)，提高聽力；③課外多閱讀，提高閱讀能力；
3．提出希望：希望他在英語方面能取得進步，并趕上其他同學(xué)．
注意：
1．書信必須包括以上提供的內(nèi)容要點，可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，使內(nèi)容連貫；
2．詞數(shù)：詞數(shù)100左右；
參考詞匯：記�。簃emorize；豐富：enrich；語調(diào)：intonation
Dear Wang Qiang，
I'm glad to hear from you．I'm very sorry that you have some trouble with your English．Now let me give you some advice on how to learn English．
First，you should memorize more words and expressions so that you can enrich your vocabulary，which is very important in English learning．（高分句型一）Second，you'd better listen more to some English tapes or CDs and try to follow the correct pronunciation and intonation．In this way you can improve your listening so that you can understand your teacher better in class．（高分句型二）Third，you can do more reading out of school in order to improve your reading skills．
I hope that my advice can help you．I also hope that you will make progress in English and catch up with your classmates soon．（高分句型三）
Best wishes for you!
Yours
Li Ming．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息假設(shè)你叫李明，你的初中同學(xué)王強到貴陽讀高中，他來信告訴你，他的英語跟不上那里學(xué)生的英語水平，課堂上聽不懂，不知道怎樣才能提高英語，希望你給他提些有關(guān)英語學(xué)習(xí)的建議．現(xiàn)在請你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示給他寫一封回信．寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點包括：對他在英語學(xué)習(xí)方面有困難表示關(guān)心，并愿意提供幫助．給他提出建議：①每天背單詞、短語，豐富詞匯量；②多聽英語錄音或光盤，模仿準(zhǔn)確的語音語調(diào)，提高聽力；③課外多閱讀，提高閱讀能力；提出希望：希望他在英語方面能取得進步，并趕上其他同學(xué)． 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：hear from收到某人的信息；have some trouble with 在…方面有困難；First首先；Second其次；Third第三；enrich your vocabulary豐富你的詞匯；In this way以這種方式；in order to以便，為了
First，you should memorize more words and expressions so that you can enrich your vocabulary，which is very important in English learning．（高分句型一）
In this way you can improve your listening so that you can understand your teacher better in class．（高分句型二）
I also hope that you will make progress in English and catch up with your classmates soon．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Wang Qiang，
       I'm glad to hear from you．I'm very sorry that you have some trouble with your English．Now let me give you some advice on how to learn English．
       First，you should memorize more words and expressions so that you can enrich your vocabulary，which is very important in English learning．（高分句型一）Second，you'd better listen more to some English tapes or CDs and try to follow the correct pronunciation and intonation．In this way you can improve your listening so that you can understand your teacher better in class．（高分句型二）Third，you can do more reading out of school in order to improve your reading skills．
       I hope that my advice can help you．I also hope that you will make progress in English and catch up with your classmates soon．（高分句型三）
       Best wishes for you!
                                                                                                                                                                                                       Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                      Li Ming

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．