Question

【題目】為了幫助中學生健康成長，某中學英文報開辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”專欄。假設你是該欄目的編輯Jamie，收到一封署名為Worried的求助信。信中該同學向你訴說了自己的困擾：近日容易發(fā)脾氣，使正常的學習和生活受到了影響。請用英文給該同學寫一封回信。

內(nèi)容要點如下：

1．表示理解并給予安慰；

2．提出建議并說明理由。

注意：

1．詞數(shù)120左右；

2．信中不能出現(xiàn)與本人相關的信息；

3．信的開頭與結尾已為你擬好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯：temper n. 脾氣，情緒

Hi Worried,

I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a bad time at the moment.

Yours,

Jamie

Answer 1

【答案】

Hi worried,

I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a had time at the moment.The truth is ereryone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you don’t have to worry so much. The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you’ll regret. Here are three useful tips:

First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel.This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. Second, go outdoors and play team games with your friends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rig of anger. And third, remain optimistic about your future. Such a positive attitude towards lift can be helpful in lifting your spirits.

I hope you’ll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.

【解析】

試題分析：為了幫助中學生健康成長，某中學英文報開辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”專欄。假設你是該欄目的編輯Jamie，收到一封署名為Worried的求助信。信中該同學向你訴說了自己的困擾：近日容易發(fā)脾氣，使正常的學習和生活受到了影響。請用英文給該同學寫一封回信。內(nèi)容要點如下：1．表示理解并給予安慰；2．提出建議并說明理由。寫作時不要逐句翻譯，可適當增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫同時要把所提示的點寫全，語句通順，同時要注意準確運用時態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系。根據(jù)句意適當使用并列連詞，同時也要合理運用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩。注意：1．詞數(shù)120左右；2．信中不能出現(xiàn)與本人相關的信息；3．信的開頭與結尾已為你擬好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

【亮點說明】I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a had time at the moment.句中使用賓語從句；The truth is ereryone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you don’t have to worry so much.定語從句和并列句同時出現(xiàn)在句中；The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you’ll regret.目的狀語從句和定語從句完美結合；First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel.介詞的賓語從句出現(xiàn)在句中；This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself.動名詞在句中運用自如；go outdoors and play team games with your friends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rig of anger.使用原因狀語從句；I hope you’ll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.賓語從句和比較級完美結合。