分析 這是一篇以"Do trust us-a generation born in the 90s"為題的演講稿.根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài).內(nèi)容包括:一表明演講題目;二描述90后的境遇;三人們的對(duì)90后的憂慮;四90后的長(zhǎng)處;五表達(dá)感謝.
高分句型:
1.Living in an environment full of fiercer competition,we,a generation born in the 90s,are faced with more problems in entering higher schools and getting employed.句子里L(fēng)iving in an environment full of fiercer competition是現(xiàn)在分詞做原因狀語(yǔ);we是主語(yǔ),a generation born in the 90s是主語(yǔ)的同位語(yǔ);are faced with 是謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞,表示"面對(duì)".
生活在一個(gè)充滿激烈競(jìng)爭(zhēng)的社會(huì),我們九零后在上學(xué)和就業(yè)方面都會(huì)面對(duì)更多的問(wèn)題.
2.They worry we care too much about ourselves and are unwilling to cooperate with others,which makes
it hard for us to achieve success in whatever we do.句子里we care too much about ourselves and are unwilling to cooperate with others是賓語(yǔ)從句,省略了引導(dǎo)詞that;which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句,代指主句we care too much about ourselves and are unwilling to cooperate with others; whatever引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句 we do.,表示"凡是我們所做的事".
他們擔(dān)心我們注重自我,不愿意和他人合作,這會(huì)讓我們所做的事很難成功.
解答 Good afternoon,everyone!
The topic of my speech today is"Do trust us-a generation born in the 90s".(表明演講題目)Living in an environment full of fiercer competition,we,a generation born in the 90s,are faced with more problems in entering higher schools and getting employed.【高分句型一】Under these circumstances,we are developing our special manners and values,which has raised people's concern.(描述90后的境遇)
They worry we care too much about ourselves and are unwilling to cooperate with others,which makes it hard for us to achieve success in whatever we do.【高分句型二】Besides,they consider us as lacking in perseverance,and this is what it takes to do any job well.Without it,we may easily give up in time of difficulty.They are also concerned that we are so eager to win instant fame that we follow fashion blindly,which will in turn ruin our values and future.(人們的對(duì)90后的憂慮)
However,we,a generation born in the 90s,have our own advantages despite some weaknesses.Firstly,we have the courage to meet challenges and take risks,which helps realize our dreams.In addition,we are quick-minded and creative.We can do our work more efficiently.Yet,we still need to learn more from those experienced.Please do trust us!(90后的長(zhǎng)處)
Thank you for your listening!(表達(dá)感謝)
Faithfully,
Li Hua
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