【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Measuring at 8.0Ms, a terrible earthquake strikes Wenchuan on May 12, 2008. A great number of houses and buildings was destroyed, left as many as 10,000,000 people homeless. That shocked us was that almost everything was in ruins. Fortunate, the government took steps immediately. Now after a decade, with people who come from all fields giving a helpful hand, a new city appears in the front of us but it looks like a beautiful garden. In my opinion, without the support of our motherland, the survivor could not lead such a comfort life as it is now. I am proud that I live so great a country.

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【解析】文章大意：汶川大地震之后，在政府的領(lǐng)導下，一座新的城市又建立起來。

第一處：時態(tài)用法錯誤。根據(jù)時間狀語on May 12, 2008可知，這里用一般過去時。句意：一場可怕的地震在2008年5月12日襲擊了汶川。故將strikes改為struck。

第二處：主謂一致錯誤。根據(jù)主語A great number of houses and buildings可知謂語動詞用復數(shù)形式。句意：許多房子和建筑物被摧毀了。故將was改為were。

第三處：句法錯誤。分析句子可知，后句應該用非限定性定語從句或現(xiàn)在分詞作結(jié)果狀語。句意：使得一千萬人無家可歸。故在left前加which或?qū)?/span>left改為leaving。

第四處：名詞性從句用法錯誤。主語從句中缺少主語，故用關(guān)系詞what。句意：讓我們所震驚的是所有的一切都處于廢墟當中。故將That改為What。

第五處：詞性用法錯誤。副詞fortunately常用來修飾整個句子，一般置于句首或句尾。句意：幸運的是，政府立即采取了措施。故將fortunate改為fortunately。

第六處：短語用法錯誤。短語in front of前面，而in the front of前部。句意：一座新的城市出現(xiàn)在我們的前面。故將the刪除。

第七處：連詞用法錯誤。根據(jù)前后句邏輯關(guān)系，這里應為并列關(guān)系。句意：并且它看起來像一座漂亮的花園。故將but改為and。

第八處：名詞數(shù)用法錯誤。名詞survivor為可數(shù)名詞，故用復數(shù)形式。句意：沒有祖國的支持，幸存者就不能過上像現(xiàn)在一樣的舒適生活。故將but改為and。

第九處：詞性用法錯誤。名詞life前用形容詞修飾。句意：幸存者就不能過上像現(xiàn)在一樣的舒適生活。故將comfort改為comfortable。

第十處：動詞用法錯誤。動詞live為不及物動詞，故后接介詞in。句意：生活在如此偉大的國度里我感到自豪。故在live后加in。

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