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【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及二個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

As the saying goes, chance favored the prepared mind. I learned this from one of my experience.

I was not chosen as member of the volleyball team of our school. Because of this, I decided to give up play volleyball. Luckily, my best friend stopped me but pointed out that it was my laziness and poor preparation which led to my failure. After that, I practiced playing volleyball on every day. When another tryout arrived, I was full prepared and tried my best. As a result, I was selected and became an important player on our school team.

From this, I am firmly convincing that we are able to seize a chance as long as I get well prepared.

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【解析】第一處：考察時(shí)態(tài)，由于這句話是諺語，諺語一般采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，故要將favored改為favors.

第二處：考察名詞單復(fù)數(shù)，one of the/形容詞性物主代詞后應(yīng)該加可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)，故要把experience后加s,變?yōu)?/span>experiences.

第三處：考察冠詞，可數(shù)名詞單數(shù)前要加冠詞，且此處表示泛指，故要在member前加上冠詞a.

第四處：考察非謂語動詞，此句中出現(xiàn)了兩個(gè)謂語動詞，分別是decided和play, 所以需要把第二個(gè)動詞變換成非謂語動詞，且需跟在介詞up之后，（介詞后面的動詞需用-ing形式），故要將play改為playing.

第五處：考察邏輯連詞，but前的句意是“我最好的朋友不讓我這么做”，but后的句意是“是我的懶惰還有準(zhǔn)備不足才導(dǎo)致了失敗”，前后并沒有轉(zhuǎn)折的意思，而是承接的關(guān)系，故要將but改為and.

第六處：考察強(qiáng)調(diào)句，it is/was…that…,故要將which改為that..

第七處：考察介詞，介詞on后應(yīng)該接名詞才可以構(gòu)成狀語，且every day本身相當(dāng)于副詞，可以單獨(dú) 作狀語，故要把on去掉.

第八處：考察副詞，副詞修飾形容詞，形容詞修飾名詞，而形容詞full后面不是名詞，而是形容詞，故要用副詞來修飾，故要將full改為fully.

第九處：考察形容詞，convincing讓人確信的，主語是物，convinced感到確信的，主語是人，而此處主語是I,故要將convincing改為convinced.

第十處：考察代詞一致，convince后引導(dǎo)的是一個(gè)完整的從句，從句的主語是we,故要將I改為we.