【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤,每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(∧),并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。

修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意:1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞;

2. 只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

Last week I went to visit to my former neighbor, Mr. Yang. He and I used to living next to each other for many years. About half a year ago, an order came which the old building, along with many other similar ones, were going to be pulled down to make room for a main street.

So I had to move apart. Mr. Yang now lives in the suburbs near a beautiful park. His new apartment is much big than before. The only problem is that it took quite a long time to get to the downtown area. Therefore, Mr. Yang doesn’t seem to worry about the long distance. He says that new subway line is to be built in a few year and he is sure life will be better in the future.

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【解析】本文主要講了上周,作者去拜訪自己以前的鄰居的故事。

1.第一處:去掉第二個(gè)to visit作"拜訪,訪問" 講時(shí),是及物動(dòng)詞。

2.第二處:living→ live used to do sth.意思是"曾經(jīng)做某事(但現(xiàn)在停止)" ;注意區(qū)分be used to (doing) sth.該短語意思是"習(xí)慣于(做)某事"。

3.第三處:which→ that that引導(dǎo)同位語從句,說明an order的內(nèi)容。

4.第四處:were→ was 在從句中,主語the old building是單數(shù),謂語動(dòng)詞仍用單數(shù)。注意along with不是并列連詞,所以它引導(dǎo)的短語不能被看作并列成分。

5.第五處:I→ We 人稱代詞的邏輯錯(cuò)誤。根據(jù)語境,這里指我們(我和住了多年的鄰居)分開了。

6.第六處:big→ bigger than before提示上文應(yīng)使用比較級。

7.第七處:took→ takes "去市區(qū)要花費(fèi)相當(dāng)長的時(shí)間"是楊先生的現(xiàn)狀,故表語從句也要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。

8.第八處:Therefore→ However 根據(jù)語境,上下文之間構(gòu)成轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系,并非因果關(guān)系,故應(yīng)改為副詞however。注意連詞but通常不用逗號隔開。

9.第九處:that后加a new subway line前需加不定冠詞a,泛指"一條新的地鐵線"。

10.第十處:year→ years a few(一些)修飾可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)。

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