Question

【題目】假如你是李華，你們學(xué)校準(zhǔn)備在下學(xué)期每天安排一節(jié)自習(xí)課。學(xué)校英語社團(tuán)就此在學(xué) 生中做了一項(xiàng)調(diào)查。請你根據(jù)以下調(diào)查結(jié)果用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿。

內(nèi)容包括：

1. 陳述調(diào)查結(jié)果；

2. 談?wù)勀銈�人的選擇及理由。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)100左右;

2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3. 開頭語已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯：自習(xí)課 a period for individual study

Good morning, everyone! Recently a survey has been done in our school about whether it is necessary to set aside a period in each school day for individual study.

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Thank you very much for your attention!

Answer 1

【答案】Good morning, everyone! Recently a survey has been done in our school about whether it is necessary to set aside a period each school day for individual study.

According to the survey, more than half of the students feel it beneficial to do so while 15 percent hold an opposite view. In addition, the rest seem to care little about it.

As for me, the time for individual study helps us students in many ways. Firstly, the period will serve as an open opportunity to review what we've learnt previously. Also, we can use this period to do our homework so that we can have more time to preview the lessons. Moreover, we can turn to the teachers or classmates immediately we encounter any problems of learning. Only by using our time more efficiently can we become a better learner.

Thank you very much for your attention!

【解析】試題分析：本文是一篇調(diào)查發(fā)言稿。學(xué)校準(zhǔn)備在下學(xué)期每天安排一節(jié)自習(xí)課，學(xué)校英語社團(tuán)做了一項(xiàng)調(diào)查：Agree55%；Don’t care30%；Disagree15%。要求發(fā)言稿1. 陳述調(diào)查結(jié)果；2. 談?wù)勀銈�人的選擇及理由。寫作時要求句子通順，內(nèi)容精煉，時態(tài)、語態(tài)使用正確，關(guān)聯(lián)詞、高級句子運(yùn)用得當(dāng)。注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右;2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3. 開頭語已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】

本文是一篇英語發(fā)言稿。文章按要求準(zhǔn)確地陳述了調(diào)查結(jié)果，并談及了個人選擇和理由。語句流暢，布局合理，使用高級句子。about whether it is necessary to set aside a period each school day for individual study. 此處whether引導(dǎo)一個介詞的賓語從句；more than half of the students feel it beneficial to do so while 15 percent hold an opposite view.while引導(dǎo)并列句；the period will serve as an open opportunity to review what we've learnt previously. what引導(dǎo)賓語從句；so that we can have more time to preview the lessons. So that引導(dǎo)目的狀語從句；Only by using our time more efficiently can we become a better learner. Only+狀語位于句子開頭，使用部分倒裝，堪稱經(jīng)典；另外，According to the survey, In addition, As for me, Firstly, Also, Moreover,的運(yùn)用也為文章增色添彩。