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【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Nowadays, as many students live in the school dormitories, it is hard to avoid having word. Last Tuesday Zhang Fan stayed up doing his homework before 10:30 pm in the dormitory. Feeling tiring, Li Hua went to bed immediately. But he couldn’t fall sleeping with lights on. He became so much angry that he lost his temper, complaining about Zhang’s selfishness. None of them was willing to say sorry but the quarrel continued. I managed to calm them down and said we should all put us in others’ shoes. They realized they were wrong and make up finally. Only when we think more for others can we create enjoyable environment.

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【解析】1.word改為words考查名詞。許多學(xué)生住在宿舍，很難避免說話。說話應(yīng)該用復(fù)數(shù)形式，故將word改為words。

2.before改為after考查連詞。根據(jù)后邊Li Hua went to bed immediately.李華馬上就上床睡覺了，根據(jù)常識，可知應(yīng)該在晚上十點半之后，不應(yīng)該是在之前，故將before改為after。

3.tiring改為tired考查形容詞。感到疲憊的用tired，tiring是讓人感到疲憊的，故將tired改為tiring。

4.sleeping改為asleep考查形容詞。入睡fall asleep，sleeping睡著的，故將sleeping改為asleep。

5.去掉much考查固定搭配。如此…以至于…so +adj +that…，故將much去掉。

6.None改為Neither考查代詞。根據(jù)文章可知這里是指李華和張芳兩個人的爭吵，兩者之間都不應(yīng)該用neither，none用于三者以上。

7.but改為so/and考查連詞。兩個人都不屈服，爭吵繼續(xù)下去。這兩句之間是因果關(guān)系或者順接關(guān)系，而不是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故將but改為so或者and。

8. us改為ourselves考查代詞。短語put oneself in other’s shoes站在別人的立場上，故將us改為ourselves。

9.make改為made考查時態(tài)。主句謂語動詞用了realized過去式，and并列連詞前邊也用了動詞were，可知后邊也應(yīng)該用一般過去式，故將make改為made。

10.create后加an考查冠詞。創(chuàng)造一個令人愉快的環(huán)境create an enjoyable environment，enjoyable是以元音讀音開始的，所以前邊用不定冠詞an，故在create后加an。