Question

【題目】假定你是李華，收到紐約大學(xué)錄取信(offer)，請你給紐約大學(xué)的招生負(fù)責(zé)人Steven寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

1. 表示感謝；

2. 咨詢需補(bǔ)寄哪些材料；

3. 詢問其他準(zhǔn)備工作。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)80左右；

2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Steven,

I am happy to know that I have been admitted to New York University. I’m very grateful for your offer, which I have been dreaming about.

I’m eager to experience my college life. However, I’m at a loss what to prepare now. I wonder if there are materials that I have to post to you. In addition, how do you arrange accommodations for foreign students? How can I apply for a scholarship? With your generous help, I believe I will be better prepared for my college life.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫一封郵件，表達(dá)對紐約大學(xué)的感謝以及詢問相關(guān)情況。

第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)用文

時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法

總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。

要求：1.表達(dá)感謝

2.詢問相關(guān)情況

1）補(bǔ)寄哪些材料。（materials）

2）其他準(zhǔn)備工作。（other preparations）

第二步:列提綱 （重點(diǎn)詞組）

be admitted to; dream about; be eager to; be at a loss; wonder; accommodations; apply for; look forward to

第三步：連詞成句

1. I am happy to know that I have been admitted to New York University.

2. which I have been dreaming about.

3. I’m eager to experience my college life.

4. I’m at a loss what to prepare now.

5. I wonder if there are materials that I have to post to you.

6. how do you arrange accommodations for foreign students?

7. How can I apply for a scholarship?

8. Looking forward to your early reply.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對比關(guān)系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(從句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果關(guān)系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，

第五步：潤色修改