【題目】假定你是李華，正計(jì)劃去英國(guó)留學(xué)，請(qǐng)給英國(guó)一所大學(xué)的招生辦的相關(guān)人員寫(xiě)一封信，咨詢?nèi)绾螌?xiě)自薦信。內(nèi)容包括：

1.介紹你的留學(xué)計(jì)劃（時(shí)間、專業(yè)等）。

2.請(qǐng)教如何寫(xiě)自薦信（內(nèi)容、注意事項(xiàng)等）

注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右。

2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

參考詞匯；self-recommendation letter自薦信

Dear Sir/Madam,

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Best Wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,

I'm Li Hua, a high school student from China. I'm writing to see if it is possible for you to do me a favor.

I'm planning to study in the UK after graduation in September for two years. I'm a science student and I'd like to major in science, such as computer science or engineering. Could you tell me how to write a self-recommendation letter? I am wondering what aspects should be included in it. What's more, are there any problems to which I need to pay special attention ?

Thank you for your kindness. I would appreciate it if you could give me an immediate reply .

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求寫(xiě)一封咨詢信。

第一步：

審題：咨詢信 咨詢?nèi)绾螌?xiě)自薦信

人稱：第一人稱

時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法，分三部分，第一部分自我介紹，說(shuō)明寫(xiě)信目的；第二部分介紹你的留學(xué)計(jì)劃，請(qǐng)教如何寫(xiě)自薦信；第三部分感謝幫助，希望盡快得到回復(fù)。

要點(diǎn)：

1. 自我介紹，說(shuō)明寫(xiě)信目的：請(qǐng)求幫助

2．介紹你的留學(xué)計(jì)劃，請(qǐng)教如何寫(xiě)自薦信

①介紹你的留學(xué)計(jì)劃：計(jì)劃9月畢業(yè)后去英國(guó)學(xué)習(xí)兩年，想學(xué)習(xí)科學(xué)方面的專業(yè)，如計(jì)算機(jī)科學(xué)或工程學(xué)

②請(qǐng)教如何寫(xiě)自薦信：自薦信應(yīng)該包括哪些方面，有什么需要特別注意的事項(xiàng)

3．感謝幫助，希望盡快得到回復(fù)

第二步：列提綱（重點(diǎn)詞匯、短語(yǔ)）

a high school student；do sb.a favor；plan to do…；after graduation；major in；a self-recommendation letter；aspect；include；pay attention to；give an immediate reply

第三步：連詞成句

(1) I'm Li Hua.

(2) I’m a high school student from China.

(3) I'm writing to see if it is possible for you to do me a favor.

(4) I'm planning to study in the UK after graduation in September for two years.

(5) I'd like to major in science.

(6) I would like to learn computer science or engineering.

(7) Could you tell me how to write a self-recommendation letter?

(8) I am wondering what aspects should be included in it.

(9) Are there any problems?

(10) I need to pay special attention to the problems.

(11) I would appreciate it if you could give me an immediate reply .

根據(jù)提示和關(guān)鍵詞進(jìn)行遣詞造句,適當(dāng)?shù)剡\(yùn)用句型，注意時(shí)態(tài)和主謂一致問(wèn)題。

第四步：連句成篇(銜接詞、亮點(diǎn)詞匯)

將第2個(gè)句子作同位語(yǔ)，連接下面的兩個(gè)句子

(1) I'm Li Hua.

(2) I’m a high school student from China.

→I'm Li Hua, a high school student from China.

用such as表示列舉，連接下面兩個(gè)句子

(5) I'd like to major in science.

(6) I would like to learn computer science or engineering.

→I'd like to major in science, such as computer science or engineering.

將第2個(gè)句子改寫(xiě)成定語(yǔ)從句,連接下面的兩個(gè)句子

(9) Are there any problems?

(10) I need to pay special attention to the problems.

→Are there any problems which I need to pay special attention to ?

→Are there any problems to which I need to pay special attention ?

適當(dāng)?shù)剡\(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯、復(fù)雜句式提升文章的檔次，增加文章的可讀性。

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