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增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在此符號(hào)下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(xiàn)（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線(xiàn)，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

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When I was a little girl, my family were very poor. My parents were workers but couldn't afford to buy toys for me. As a result, my dolls looked a lot differently from that bought from toy stores. My dolls were home-made. The first doll I owned was made of a glass Coca-Cola bottle. I was so excited to make a doll by my own. Soon I became a collector of empty Coca-Cola bottles although I saw each bottle as possible baby doll at that time. People who worked in the store sell Coca-Cola could see me pick up empty bottles almost every day. Those home-made toys had brought me a lot of happy.

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【解析】本文為記敘文。文章中作者回憶了自己小時(shí)候，家里很窮，沒(méi)錢(qián)買(mǎi)玩具，所以她的玩具都是自己制作的。雖然她的玩具看起來(lái)沒(méi)有商店里的好看，但是給她很多的快樂(lè)。

第一處：were→was；考查復(fù)合名詞主謂一致。根據(jù)語(yǔ)境可知，此處應(yīng)指“我家（庭）很窮”，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞應(yīng)使用單數(shù)形式。故were改為was。

第二處：but→and；考查并列連詞。分析句意可知，前后為并列關(guān)系，不是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，應(yīng)使用and。故but改為and。

第三處：differently→different；考查形容詞。分析句子成分可知，此處作感官系動(dòng)詞look的表語(yǔ)，意為“看起來(lái)和玩具店里的那些很不一樣”，應(yīng)使用形容詞形式。故differently改為different。

第四處：that→those；考查代詞。此處是與my dolls對(duì)比，前后數(shù)上應(yīng)保持一致，指“從玩具店里買(mǎi)的那些玩具”，應(yīng)使用復(fù)數(shù)形式。故that改為those。

第五處：by→on；考查介詞搭配。固定短語(yǔ)：on one’s own“靠自己”。故by改為on。

第六處：although→because/as/since；考查連詞。句意：不久，我成為一個(gè)可口可樂(lè)瓶子的收集者，因?yàn)槟菚r(shí)候我把每個(gè)瓶子都看成一個(gè)可能的玩具娃娃。分析句意可知，前后是因果關(guān)系，不存在讓步關(guān)系。故although改為because/as/since。

第七處：possible前加a；考查冠詞。此處泛指“一個(gè)可能的玩具娃娃”。故possible前加a。

第八處：sell→selling；考查非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知，本句主干為People could see me pick up empty bottles almost every day.，句中sell與主語(yǔ)people為邏輯主謂關(guān)系，作定語(yǔ)，應(yīng)使用-ing形式。故sell改為selling。

第九處：去掉had；考查動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)語(yǔ)境可知，此處描述的是過(guò)去的客觀事實(shí)，應(yīng)使用一般過(guò)去時(shí)。故去掉had。

第十處：happy→happiness；考查介詞搭配。根據(jù)a lot of可知，此處應(yīng)使用名詞“快樂(lè)”。故happy改為happiness。

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