【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

I was on the Sichuan Airlines passenger flight traveling from Chongqing to Lhasa. A plane was flying at a height of about 9,700 meters while an extremely loud sound was heard. The plane experienced a sudden lose of air pressure and drop in temperature. When I looked over, I saw a window was going and the passenger seated by that window had halfway out of the window. The passenger is wearing his seatbelt, because of that he was able to be pulled back inside the plane. Fortunately, he only suffered several minor injury. Difficult as it seemed to control the plane, but the pilot safely landed the plane in Chengdu. Neither of the plane’s 119 passengers were hurt.

【答案】第一處：A改為the

第二處：while改為when

第三處：lose改為loss

第四處：going改為gone

第五處：had后加been

第六處：is改為was

第七處：that改為which

第八處：injury改為injuries

第九處：刪除but

第十處：Neither改為None

【解析】

本文是一篇記敘文，一架從成都飛往拉薩的航班在高空中突然失去氣壓，機(jī)艙里溫度急劇下降，但飛行員冷靜處理，讓飛機(jī)在成都安全降落。

第一處：考查定冠詞。不定冠詞a/an表示泛指，定冠詞the表示特指，the flight特指前面一句中提到的從重慶去拉薩的航班。句意：本次航班正在9700米的高度飛機(jī)在這時(shí)突然聽見了一個(gè)極大的噪音。故把A改為The。

第二處：考查固定句式。句式be doing sth when….正在做某事在這時(shí)….(發(fā)生了意料之外的事情)，句中的when是一個(gè)并列連詞。句意：本次航班正在9700米的高度飛機(jī)在這時(shí)突然聽見了一個(gè)極大的噪音。故要把while改為when。

第三處：考查名詞。句意：這架飛機(jī)體驗(yàn)了突然失去氣壓和溫度迅速降低。句中的形容詞sudden要修飾名詞，句中的lose是動(dòng)詞，所以要把lose改為loss。

第四處：考查形容詞。句意：當(dāng)我查看的時(shí)候，我看見一個(gè)窗戶不見了。句中形容詞gone不見了，和系動(dòng)詞was構(gòu)成系表結(jié)構(gòu)。故把going改為gone。

第五處：考查時(shí)態(tài)。當(dāng)我看到的時(shí)候，飛機(jī)沒有一扇窗戶，坐在窗戶旁邊的乘客半個(gè)身子已經(jīng)在外面了，使用過去完成時(shí)描述當(dāng)時(shí)的情況。故要在had后面加been。

第六處：考查時(shí)態(tài)。句意：這位乘客帶著安全帶，正因?yàn)檫@樣，他才能夠被拉回飛機(jī)里。本文敘述了過去發(fā)生的一起事故，全文都使用一般過去時(shí)。所以要把is改為was。

第七處：考查定語從句。本句中which指代前面一句話的內(nèi)容在句中做because of的賓語。句意：這位乘客帶著安全帶，正因?yàn)檫@樣，他才能夠被拉回飛機(jī)里。關(guān)系代詞that不能做介詞的賓語，所以要把that改為which。

第八處：考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)。本句中有形容詞several，說明后面應(yīng)該使用可數(shù)名詞的復(fù)數(shù)形式。句意：幸運(yùn)地是，他只受了幾個(gè)小傷。故把injury改為injuries。

第九處：考查連詞。句中含有“形容詞+as+句子其他成分”句式，相當(dāng)于Though….；句意：盡管控制飛機(jī)似乎很難，但是飛行員還是讓飛機(jī)在成都安全降落了。連詞though和but不能連用，所以把句中的but刪除。

第十處：考查代詞。代詞neither指兩者都不，none指三者或三者以上都不。飛機(jī)上有119名乘客，他們都沒有受傷。所以使用代詞none。

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