Question

【題目】假定你是李華， 你校學(xué)生會組織學(xué)生下周六開展關(guān)愛自閉癥兒童(children with autism)義演活動。請你給外教Shelly寫一封郵件， 邀請她一同前往。

內(nèi)容：1.時間和地點；

2. 活動內(nèi)容(現(xiàn)場表演、義賣等)。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)， 以使行文連貫。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Shelly,

I’d like to invite you to join us in an activity of caring for children with autism, which is to take place at Zhongshan Road next Saturday. Needless to say, there are a number of such special children around us who are incapable of communicating freely with others and need more people to take care of them. That day we will give performances like singing, dancing and playing musical instruments to draw attention to the children.In the meanwhile, some pretty works designed by us students will be displayed for sale. The money collected will go to charity. We should be back around 4 o’clock in the afternoon. If you are able to come with us, please let us know and we’ll wait for you at the school gate at 9 in the morning.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生邀請外教Shelly一同前往下周六開展的義演活動。

第一步: 審題

體裁: 應(yīng)用文

時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時。

結(jié)構(gòu): 總分法

總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。

要求：

1. 時間和地點；

2. 活動內(nèi)容(現(xiàn)場表演、義賣等)。

第二步: 列提綱 (重點詞組)

in an activity of；look forward to；a number of；take care of

第三步: 連詞成句

I’d like to invite you to join us in an activity of caring for children with autism, which is to take place at Zhongshan Road next Saturday.

Needless to say, there are a number of such special children around us who are incapable of communicating freely with others and need more people to take care of them.

In the meanwhile, some pretty works designed by us students will be displayed for sale.

If you are able to come with us, please let us know and we’ll wait for you at the school gate at 9 in the morning.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第四步: 連句成篇 (銜接詞)

1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second，And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, including,

3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對比關(guān)系：However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause(從句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand, On the other hand, while, as for

4.表因果關(guān)系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，

第五步: 潤色修改