Question

【題目】在你看過的電影、電視和書中，肯定有許多場景歷歷在目，請你描述令你印象深刻的一個場景，并談談為什么。你的文章必須包括：

1.描述你印象深刻的一個場景；

2.說明你對此印象深刻的理由。

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Answer 1

【答案】Recently I watched a great film named Ne Zha, which is worth watching.

The most memorable scene is towards the end of the movie when, during his only good friend, Ao Bing, suffers from the darkest moment of self-doubt, he is touched by what Ne Zha tells him: “My destiny is governed by mself not God! Whether it’s a demon or a fairy, I’ll make up my own mind!” It’s one of the most unforgettable lines from the movie.

This film tells us an important truth: your attitude determines your life. Actually, there was a time when I got tired of everything because of the difficulties I had. But ever since I watched the movie, I have entirely changed my attitude towards life. At present, I am grateful to my parents for their love and also I’ve fallen in love with my study.

【解析】

本篇書面表達屬于半開放式寫作。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本篇為半開放式寫作；在你看過的電影、電視和書中，肯定有許多場景歷歷在目，請你描述令你印象深刻的一個場景，并談談為什么。你的文章必須包括：1.描述你印象深刻的一個場景；2.說明你對此印象深刻的理由。人稱使用第三人稱。描寫影視作品時，應為一般現(xiàn)在時時。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關鍵詞（組），如：the most memorable scene (印象最深刻的場景)，unforgettable (難以忘記的)，important truth (重要的事實)等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。