Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華,你的美國筆友Jim 對中華傳統(tǒng)文化很感興趣，經(jīng)常與你討論這方面的話題。請你給他寫一封郵件，談?wù)勀阍鴧⒓舆^的一次相關(guān)活動，內(nèi)容包括：

1. 介紹活動內(nèi)容；

2. 說明參加的理由；

3. 表達(dá)參加后的感受。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100 左右;

2. 郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Jim，

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jim,

How's everything going? I know you're interested in traditional Chinese culture, so I'm writing to tell you one of my recent experiences.

I visited the Capital Museum during the winter vacation and explored Chinese history culture. I chose it as my destination because it houses a variety of exhibits, like paintings, antiques crafts and so on. Besides, the architecture of the museum features the combination of tradition and modernity.

The visit is indeed worthwhile. I'm amazed at the wisdom of Chinese people and impressed by the brilliance of Chinese civilization.

Feel an ich for the visit? I'd like to show you around the museum. Waiting for your coming!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

這是一篇應(yīng)用文。本篇要求考生給Jim寫信，給他講述你曾經(jīng)參加的和中國傳統(tǒng)文化相關(guān)的一次活動，并談?wù)勛约旱母惺堋?/span>

體裁：應(yīng)用文

時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)以一般過去時(shí)為主

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分總

要求：

表明寫信目的

1. 介紹活動內(nèi)容；

2． 說明參加的理由；

3. 表達(dá)參加后的感受。

第二步：列提綱（重點(diǎn)詞組）

take part in/ be related to/ be interested in/ introduce sb. sth./have a better understanding of/ show sb. around/ a variety of/the reason for

第三步：連詞成句

How's everything going?

Knowing you're interested in traditional Chinese culture, I'm writing to tell you one of my recent experiences.

I paid a visit to the Capital Museum during the winter vacation and explored Chinese history culture.

The reason why I chose it as my destination was that it houses a variety of exhibits, such as paintings, antiques crafts and so on.

The architecture of the museum features the combination of tradition and modernity.

I' m amazed at the wisdom of Chinese people and impressed by the brilliance of Chinese civilization.

I' d like to show you around the museum.

Looking forward to your coming!

第四步：連句成篇（加入銜接詞或從句）

表示并列的連詞：and/but/or/so…

狀語從句連詞：because/ if/ though/ although…

定語從句連詞：which/ that/ when/ where…

第五步：修改潤色（加入高級詞匯或短語）