【題目】假定你是李華，你的加拿大朋友Michael很想了解中國(guó)新農(nóng)村的變化。

根據(jù)以下提示，給Michael寫一封電子郵件，并邀請(qǐng)他來(lái)參觀體驗(yàn)。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3. 開頭和結(jié)尾己給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Michael,

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】Dear Michael,

I’m delighted to know that you are interested in the new countryside of China.

In the past, the roads were narrow, which was inconvenient to travel around. Usually, a big family was crowded into a small, dark house. So the living conditions were far from satisfactory.

Thanks to China’s rural reform, many villages have developed rapidly in recent years. The roads are wide and smooth. More and more villagers have their own cars. Besides, computers and mobile phones are becoming increasingly popular. Many villages have changed into rich, clean and peaceful ones.

If you like, I’ll guide you around my hometown , appreciating its harmony and beauty.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本文為提綱類作文，審題是否清楚是一篇書面表達(dá)成功與否的關(guān)鍵所在，在整個(gè)寫作過(guò)程中起著決定性作用。本文的要求是你的加拿大朋友Michael很想了解中國(guó)新農(nóng)村的變化，根據(jù)提示給Michael寫一封電子郵件，并邀請(qǐng)他來(lái)參觀體驗(yàn)。書信格式開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，避免了文體錯(cuò)誤。寫作時(shí)用第一人稱“我”，即李華。主體時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)、一般過(guò)去時(shí)和現(xiàn)在完成進(jìn)行時(shí)。

寫作時(shí)，通過(guò)對(duì)提示的觀察和分析，找出最密切相關(guān)的要點(diǎn)，不要任意發(fā)揮，畫蛇添足，也不要丟三落四，要點(diǎn)不全。另外，在體裁明確、中心突出、要點(diǎn)清晰的前提下，應(yīng)該選擇自己最熟悉、最有把握的詞語(yǔ)、句型，將要點(diǎn)逐條表達(dá)出來(lái)。表達(dá)時(shí)應(yīng)該綜合運(yùn)用所掌握的知識(shí)，避開生僻的詞匯，并克服母語(yǔ)的干擾，要注意選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)谋硎静⒘小⑦f進(jìn)、因果或轉(zhuǎn)折意義的過(guò)渡詞，把所有要點(diǎn)、句子連接起來(lái)，使句與句意思連貫，結(jié)構(gòu)銜接，力求準(zhǔn)確生動(dòng)、條理清楚，按照英語(yǔ)的習(xí)慣方式，用地道的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)，力求做到語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確無(wú)誤。

本文亮點(diǎn)：本文用了書信應(yīng)該用的格式，用了一般過(guò)去時(shí)，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)等時(shí)態(tài)穿插，對(duì)比今昔生活的變化。先回憶過(guò)去的情形，后以現(xiàn)在的變化突出新農(nóng)村的美好生活，要點(diǎn)全面，思路清晰，最后發(fā)出邀請(qǐng)，請(qǐng)他來(lái)參觀體驗(yàn)。語(yǔ)言地道，過(guò)渡詞使用恰當(dāng)，是一篇好文。

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