Question

【題目】Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

成長道路上難免遇到來自同伴的壓力(peer pressure)。同伴壓力可能給我們帶來積極或消極的影響。請結(jié)合自己生活中的一個具體事例, 談?wù)勀愕捏w會。

注意:請勿透露本人真實姓名和學校名稱。

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Answer 1

【答案】There is no doubt that we are faced with peer pressure every day. Peer pressure has both advantages and disadvantages, and the key is with what kind of mentality we look at it.

If we are always envious of others famous brand clothes or shoes, we will inevitably have the desire to compare ourselves, which is bad for our personal development. On the contrary, peer pressure which is from studies will motivate us to get good grades For example, when my deskmate got a better grade in the mid-term exam than me, I made up my mind to surpass him in the model exam, As a result, I made full use of time to study hard and spared no effort to prepare for the final exam. As it turned out, I did better in the final exam than him

In word, peer pressure is a normal phenomenon, which we can't avoid. And as long as we face it positively, it will be beneficial to our personal development.

【解析】

本篇書面表達是開放性作文，要求就來自同伴的壓力談?wù)勛约旱捏w會。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本文要求就來自同伴的壓力談?wù)勛约旱捏w會：成長道路上難免遇到來自同伴的壓力(peer pressure)。同伴壓力可能給我們帶來積極或消極的影響。請結(jié)合自己生活中的一個具體事例, 談?wù)勀愕捏w會，時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般過去時。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如； peer pressure（同齡壓力），mentality（心態(tài)），surpass（超過），beneficial（有益的）， motivate（激勵），inevitably（不可避免地）及compare（攀比）等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持卷面的整潔美觀。