Question

【題目】你的英語老師讓同學(xué)們就發(fā)展克隆技術(shù)展開了討論，同學(xué)們紛紛發(fā)表了自己的看法。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的表格寫一篇120個(gè)詞左右的短文做一總結(jié)，并發(fā)表自己的看法。

話題	Cloning
觀點(diǎn)及 支持率	65% for	35% against	你的觀點(diǎn)
理由	1.克隆技術(shù)能夠促進(jìn)科學(xué)的發(fā)展； 2．克隆技術(shù)對(duì)人類很有益，它可以幫助治愈很多疾病，挽救很多人的生命	1.目前，克隆技術(shù)還存在很多問題，濫用這項(xiàng)技術(shù)會(huì)給人類帶來難以想象的后果； 2．如果有科學(xué)家利用克隆技術(shù)來克隆人的話，將會(huì)導(dǎo)致很多問題的出現(xiàn)，如人口猛增等	……

注意：開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Today we had a class discussion about whether cloning should be developed. Opinions varied.

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Answer 1

【答案】Today we had a class discussion about whether cloning should be developed. Opinions varied.

About 65% of the students argue that cloning should be encouraged because it is part of the general development and progress of science, which has brought us many benefits. We have good reasons to think cloning can help cure many diseases and save lives.

However, 35% of the students hold that cloning still has too many unsolved problems associated with it, and the misuse of it could have unimaginable consequences. Furthermore, the cloning of humans could lead to social problems, such as population explosion.

In my opinion, since cloning is such a new technology, we must be careful to make appropriate use of it. It could bring us a lot of benefits as long as we can avoid the possibility of causing harm.

【解析】試題分析：本文是一篇談?wù)摽偨Y(jié)。就“發(fā)展克隆技術(shù)”學(xué)生發(fā)表了自己的看法，根據(jù)下面的表格寫一篇120個(gè)詞左右的短文做一總結(jié)，并發(fā)表自己的看法。根據(jù)所給提綱并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運(yùn)用英語知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來。寫作時(shí)注意時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)的合理運(yùn)用，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】

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