【題目】假定你是李華，最近收到了你的英國(guó)朋友Jacob的來(lái)信，得知他已經(jīng)考上了一所名牌大學(xué)。請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)信向他表示祝賀，并就你在大學(xué)專(zhuān)業(yè)選擇上遇到的困惑征求他的意見(jiàn)。信的內(nèi)容包括：

1.向 Jacob 表示祝賀；

2.談?wù)勀阍诖髮W(xué)專(zhuān)業(yè)選擇上的困惑；

3.向?qū)Ψ秸髑笠庖?jiàn)和建議。

注意：1.詞數(shù) 100 左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

【答案】Dear Jacob,

Having heard from you, I’m writing to extend my warm congratulations to you, because you have been admitted to a famous University.

As for me, I suffer from confusion when choosing my major. Initially, what I’m concerned about lies in whether the major will be suitable for me. Additionally, I prefer the one that is beneficial to my career prospects, instead of so-called popular major.

To avoid making my decision blindly, I expect you to recommend some practical proposals to me, including analyzing the advantages and disadvantages of a certain profession. I would appreciate it if you can do me a favor.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本篇寫(xiě)作屬于書(shū)信類(lèi)——求助信，要求考生掌握書(shū)信的格式，并有良好的語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力和補(bǔ)充 細(xì)節(jié)能力。注意在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中明確地分段使文章具備合理的邏輯關(guān)系，包含所給要點(diǎn)信息，即表達(dá)謝意，面臨問(wèn)題，尋求幫助。如果想達(dá)到 21-25分一檔作文的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，必須豐富語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】

文章開(kāi)頭兩句寫(xiě)表達(dá)祝賀及原因，使用了 Having heard from 非謂語(yǔ)作狀語(yǔ)，because引導(dǎo)的原因狀從兩種高級(jí)語(yǔ)法，extend（表達(dá)）, be admitted to（被錄�。﹥蓚�(gè)高級(jí)詞匯。

正文第一部分交代了面臨的問(wèn)題，重點(diǎn)在于補(bǔ)充的內(nèi)容。使用了 when choosing my major 狀從省略，what I’m concerned about lies in whether the major will be suitable for me.主語(yǔ)從句加表語(yǔ)從句，the one which is beneficial to my career prospects定語(yǔ)從句等三種高級(jí)語(yǔ)法，陳列事例時(shí)用 initially 和 additionally 替換了老套的 firstly, secondly。詞匯方面使用了 suffer from, confusion, be concerned about, lie in, be suitable for, be beneficial to, prospect。

正文第二部分側(cè)重征求意見(jiàn)，使用了不定式作狀語(yǔ) to avoid，if 引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句以及 blindly, recommend, practical proposals 等高級(jí)詞匯。

結(jié)尾為常規(guī)類(lèi)書(shū)信企盼回復(fù)。

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