Question

【題目】假定你是李華，打算下個(gè)月到倫敦參加一個(gè)英語口語培訓(xùn)班。請(qǐng)給曾經(jīng)在你校留學(xué)的倫敦學(xué)生Eric發(fā)一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

1.倫敦之行的目的；

2.邀請(qǐng)Eric重聚；

3.表達(dá)感謝與期望。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Eric,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Eric,

We haven’t seen each other since you returned to your country two years ago. I’m delighted to tell you that I’ll go to your city to attend a training class for spoken English next month and I want to call on you.

According to the schedule, I will stay in London for only seven days. I would appreciate it very much if you could spare time to meet me at your convenience. I think that we will have a lot to share with each other.

Thank you in advance for your kindness. I’m looking forward to meeting you in London soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫一封郵件，向曾經(jīng)在本校留學(xué)的校友Eric告知倫敦之行并邀請(qǐng)重聚。

第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)用文

時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)。

結(jié)構(gòu)：三段式結(jié)構(gòu)。第一段告知倫敦之行；第二段提出重聚邀請(qǐng)；第三段表達(dá)感謝和期望。

要求：1. 告知倫敦之行（attend a training class for spoken English next month）

2. 提出重聚邀請(qǐng)

1）時(shí)間安排（According to the schedule, I will stay in London for only seven days.）

2）提出邀請(qǐng)（spare time to meet me at your convenience）

3. 表達(dá)感謝和期望（I’m looking forward to meeting you in London soon.）

第二步:列提綱 （重點(diǎn)詞組）

return to; be delighted to do; call on sb.; according to; spare time to do; at your convenience; share with; in advance; look forward to

第三步：連詞成句

1. We haven’t seen each other since you returned to your country two years ago.

2. I’m delighted to tell you that I’ll go to your city to attend a training class for spoken English next month and I want to call on you.

3. According to the schedule, I will stay in London for only seven days.

4. I would appreciate it very much if you could spare time to meet me at your convenience.

5. I think that we will have a lot to share with each other.

6. Thank you in advance for your kindness.

7. I’m looking forward to meeting you in London soon.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，

第五步：潤(rùn)色修改