Question

【題目】假定你是學(xué)生會主席李華，你校正在創(chuàng)建“和諧校園”。請你代表學(xué)生會給全校學(xué)生寫一封倡議書，內(nèi)容包括：

1. 倡議目的；

2. 倡議內(nèi)容；

3. 提出呼吁。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

參考詞匯：和諧校園harmonious campus

Dear fellow students,

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The Student Union

Answer 1

【答案】Dear fellow students,

Harmony is the common feature of all beautiful things. In order to create a pleasant environment, our school is aiming to build a harmonious campus. As students, we can do our part to achieve this goal.

First of all, we should keep our campus clean and take good care of every tree and every flower. Secondly, not only should we show respect for our teachers, but we are also supposed to care for each other and help those in need. Most importantly, for us students, nothing is more essential that studying hard and taking an active part in school activities. It is when every individual makes an effort that we can have a more beautiful and harmonious school.

Let’s take action.

The Student Union

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文, 要求寫一封創(chuàng)建“和諧校園”的倡議書。

第一步：

審題：倡議書

人稱：第一人稱

時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法，分三部分，第一部分說明倡議的目的，第二部分說明倡議的具體內(nèi)容，

第三部分呼吁大家行動起來。

要點(diǎn)：

1.倡議的目的：創(chuàng)建“和諧校園”

2.倡議的具體內(nèi)容

①保持校園清潔，愛護(hù)樹木花草

②尊敬老師，互相關(guān)愛和幫助

③努力學(xué)習(xí)，積極參加學(xué)�；顒�

3．呼吁大家行動起來

第二步：列提綱（重點(diǎn)詞匯、短語）

harmony；create a pleasant environment；aim to do；achieve goal；keep our campus clean；show respect for；care for；in need；study hard；take an active part in；makes an effort；take action

第三步：連詞成句

(1) Harmony is the common feature of all beautiful things.

(2) Our school is aiming to build a harmonious campus.

(3) We should keep our campus clean and take good care of every tree and every flower.

(4) Not only should we show respect for our teachers, but we are also supposed to care for each other and help those in need.

(5) We should study hard and take an active part in school activities.

(6) Every individual makes an effort.

(7) We can have a more beautiful and harmonious school.

第四步：連句成篇(銜接詞)

表示時(shí)間順序：first of all，to begin/start with，in the beginning，firstly，secondly，lastly，finally，in the end

表示并列或補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：what is more，besides，moreover，apart from，in addition，as well as，not only…but (also)，meanwhile，in the meantime

表示轉(zhuǎn)折對比關(guān)系：but，however，although，though，yet，while，on one hand，on the other hand

表示因果關(guān)系：because，as，therefore，as a result，as a consequence，consequently，thus

連句成文，運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)?shù)你暯釉~進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，使句與句之間邏輯性更強(qiáng)、

段與段之間結(jié)構(gòu)清晰。