Question

【題目】假設你是紅星中學高三學生李華。你的英國好友 Jim 在做關于“中學生做家務”的調查，想了解你做家務的情況。請你給他回復郵件，內容包括：

1）你平時做哪些家務；

2）你對中學生做家務的看法。

注意: 1.詞數(shù)不少于 50；

2.開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Jim,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jim,

Knowing you are conducting a survey of the housework that high school students do at home, I’m writing to tell you about what I do.

Although my school schedule is rather tight, I still manage to help with the housework from time to time. I will clean up after dinner. I also help with other things like sweeping and dusting. Every once in a while, I will cook something for my family. So far, my spaghetti has been the most delicious dish.

I think high school students should do some housework. For one thing, by doing housework we learn to take responsibility at home, and in the longer term, in society. For another, I find the time spent doing housework with my parents really fun and rewarding; we chat with each other and sometimes even sing together. Doing housework can be a great break from my busy school work.

Good luck with your survey.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達屬于應用文，要求考生寫一封郵件，回復Jim關于你做家務的情況。

第一步：審題

體裁：應用文；

人稱：第一、二人稱為主；

時態(tài)：根據提示，時態(tài)應為一般現(xiàn)在時；

要點：

1）你平時做哪些家務；

2）你對中學生做家務的看法。

第二步：列提綱 （重點詞組）

at home；manage to do；from time to time；clean up；a survey of；so far；do some housework；in the longer term；take responsibility；chat with；school work等

第三步：連詞成句

1. Knowing you are conducting a survey of the housework that high school students do at home, I’m writing to tell you about what I do.

2. Although my school schedule is rather tight, I still manage to help with the housework from time to time.

3. I also help with other things like sweeping and dusting.

4. Every once in a while, I will cook something for my family.

5. I think high school students should do some housework.

6. By doing housework we learn to take responsibility at home, and in the longer term, in society.

7. I find the time spent doing housework with my parents really fun and rewarding.

8. Doing housework can be a great break from my busy school work.

根據提示及關鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表轉折對比關系：Although；For one thing…For another…；

2.表并列補充關系：still；also；and；even；

3.表示時間關系：Every once等

連句成文，注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰。

第五步：潤色修改