Question

【題目】假定你是學(xué)生會主席李華，為促進語言學(xué)習與文化交流，你校計劃與英國丁克洛斯中學(xué)（Dean Close Senior School）進行圖書交換活動。請給校園英文報擬一封倡議書，建議大家踴躍捐贈圖書。

要點如下：

1.表達捐書目的；

2.說明圖書要求；

3.說明捐書地點（圖書館301房間）和截止日期（4月23日）。

寫作要求：

1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3.開頭和結(jié)尾部分已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear students,

I am writing to announce a plan of our school.

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Thank you for your cooperation!

Students’ Union

Answer 1

【答案】Dear students,

I’m writing to announce a plan of our school. Our school, together with Dean Close Senior School in England, is working on a book exchange project. Both sides are to benefit a lot from this activity. For one thing, students from the two schools will have access to more authentic reading materials, which are good for their language learning. For another, it will help promote culture communication between the two countries.

Besides, I have to state that all the books exchanged during this activity come from our students. So I hope you can donate some books with simple stories, which can help the British students learn Chinese. Also, books on the Chinese culture are welcome. All the books should be donated to Room 301 of the school library before April 23rd.

Thank you for your cooperation!

Students’ Union

【解析】試題分析：本次作文要求寫一封倡議書，建議大家踴躍捐贈圖書。要點如下：1.表達捐書目的；2.說明圖書要求；3.說明捐書地點（圖書館301房間）和截止日期（4月23）。寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，可以適當增加過渡語句，以使行文連貫。同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，特別注意在選擇句式時要富有變化。

寫作亮點：本篇條理清楚，要點全面，結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。其句式上的變化既使得文章生動而流暢，也體現(xiàn)了作者駕馭句式的能力。例如：文章運用了定語從句which are good for their language learning.及which can help the British students learn Chinese.和have access to及promote culture communication等詞匯。