Question

【題目】假定你是李華，你的美國筆友Dan Friedell來信詢問中國廣場舞。請你寫一封電子郵件，介紹你了解的情況。信的內(nèi)容包括：

1．時間和地點；

2．舞蹈人群；

3．舞蹈形式。

注意：

1．詞數(shù)100左右；

2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

3．開頭結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入字?jǐn)?shù)。

Dear Dan Friedell,

I’m gald to tell you something about square dance.

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Dan Friedell

Square dance has been popular only in recent years.People dance in the evening on a spquare in the city and they never dance along the street.The goal of the dance is to get some exercise to benefit health and of course there are still some who are interested in dancing.

They are usually dancing to popular music played by music equipment.The dances are simple

And very easy to learn.They often attract passers-by, standing by and watching,but they are slso blamed for their loud noises.Sometimes they are too noisy indeed!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本題考查提綱類作文。首先要認(rèn)真審題，假定你是李華，你的美國筆友Dan Friedell來信詢問中國廣場舞。請你寫一封電子郵件，介紹你了解的情況。信的內(nèi)容包括：1．時間和地點；2．舞蹈人群；3．舞蹈形式。其次要確定時態(tài)，表示經(jīng)常或反復(fù)發(fā)生的事情，所以這篇文章要使用一般現(xiàn)在時。然后要確定文章的結(jié)構(gòu)，按照題目所給內(nèi)容逐條翻譯即可。在寫作過程中，上下文意思要連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合題目所給出的信息，不要出現(xiàn)偏題問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有文采。正確使用寫信的格式，詞數(shù)控制在一百詞左右。

【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了一些高級句型。例如The goal of the dance is to get some exercise to benefit health and of course there are still some who are interested in dancing.這里含有一個定語從句。