Question

【題目】短文改錯, 格式錯誤不得分

假如英語課上老師要求同學(xué)們交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的一篇作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，要求你在錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。

注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2．只允許修改10處，多者（從11處起）不記分。

Life is full of ups and downs but it is never too easy to achieve success. As the old English say goes “Failure is the mother of success.” I was asked to play in a table tennis match last term. After the match, I was confident I would win. Therefore, I failed. How sadly I was! Luckily, my P.E. teacher helped me out. He told me not to lose my heart. He also helped me my skills. With his help, my confidence returned and I come up with several new idea. The next day, though I had to play against another more experience boy, I beat him. So don’t be afraid of failure. If we can deal with it well, failure can be the mother of success.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】but→and

【2】say→saying

【3】After→Before

【4】Therefore→However

【5】sadly→sad

【6】去掉my

【7】加with

【8】come→came

【9】idea→ideas

【10】experience→experienced

【解析】

試題分析：

【1】but→and考查連詞。根據(jù)句意人生中充滿了起伏，實(shí)現(xiàn)成功從來不是容易的事，可知兩個簡單句之間并無轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系而是并列關(guān)系，故改為and。

【2】say→saying考查名詞。Saying諺語，根據(jù)句意就像那句諺語說的“失敗是成功之母”

【3】After→Before考查連詞。根據(jù)句意，在比賽之前，我以為我能贏，故改為Before。

【4】Therefore→However考查連詞。前句I was confident I would win和I failed之間不應(yīng)該為因果關(guān)系，應(yīng)該為轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故改為However。

【5】sadly→sad考查形容詞。此句為感嘆句，sad為was的表語，副詞不可做表語，根據(jù)句意我是多么傷心，此處為形容詞，故改為sad。

【6】去掉my考查動詞短語。lose one’s heart失去某人的心，lose heart失去信心，根據(jù)句意我的體育老師告訴我不要失去信心，故去掉my。

【7】加with考查動詞。Help sb with sth表示幫助某人做某事，故加with。

【8】come→came考查動詞時態(tài)。全文為一般過去時，且根據(jù)returned提示，此處應(yīng)用過去式，故改為came。

【9】idea→ideas考查名詞。Several表示若干個，幾個，加可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)。idea為可數(shù)名詞，故改為ideas。

【10】experience→experienced考查形容詞。experienced有經(jīng)驗(yàn)的，more修飾形容詞比較級，且此處為形容詞修飾名詞即boy，故改為experienced。