Question

【題目】假如你是紅星中學高三學生李華。以下四幅圖片反映了你所在的城市開展“文明交通月”(Road Civility Month)活動的前后變化。請根據(jù)圖片的提示，以“Great Changes”為題， 給校報英語專欄寫一篇英文稿件。內(nèi)容要點如下：

1. 開展“文明交通月”活動的前后變化；

2. 你的感想。

注意：1. 短文標題和開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；

2. 詞數(shù)：100詞左右。

參考詞匯：行人pedestrian；人行橫道pedestrian crossing

Great Changes

I am deeply impressed by the great changes that have been taken place in our city since the campaign Road Civility Month was lauched.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】Great Changes

I am deeply impressed by the great changes that have taken place in our city since the campaign Road Civility Month was launched.

In the past, there existed lots of improper behavior in our city. As was often the case, people crossed the road whenever they like, totally ignoring the traffic lights. Besides, some drivers even didn’t slow down when approaching the pedestrian crossing. But now, our city has taken on a new look. Citizens, especially we students, follow the policeman’s direction and well observe the traffic rules while crossing the road. Meanwhile, we often find drivers stop willingly near the pedestrian crossing and let passers-by go first.

I feel proud of these changes, which make our life more harmonious. If all the pedestrians and drivers obey the traffic rules, road safety won’t be a bother to us any more.

【解析】首先審題，這篇文章要求假如你是紅星中學高三學生李華。以下四幅圖片反映了你所在的城市開展“文明交通月”(Road Civility Month)活動的前后變化。請根據(jù)圖片的提示，以“Great Changes”為題， 給校報英語專欄寫一篇英文稿件。任務(wù)中給出的提示信息包含如下內(nèi)容：1. 開展“文明交通月”活動的前后變化；2. 你的感想。抓住了這亮點，我們就抓住了文章的核心內(nèi)容。其次選用正確的人稱和時態(tài)，描寫過去，考慮用一般過去時；描寫現(xiàn)在，用現(xiàn)在完成時，用第一人稱來寫。然后寫出單個句子，使用正確的連詞，連句成段。具體來說，寫這篇文章時，要注意:提示中的內(nèi)容比較泛泛，需要適當補充。這篇文章對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。

【亮點說明】本篇書面表達要點全面，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，是一篇較好的范文。這篇短文使用了大量的短語，為文章增色不少，如: slow down減速，take on呈現(xiàn)。還使用了定語從句I feel proud of these changes, which make our life more harmonious.等多種句式結(jié)構(gòu)，增加了文章的可讀性。