Question

【題目】據(jù)我校大部分教師反映，近些年來，隨著網(wǎng)絡的普及，越來越多的學生的書寫能力明顯退步了。為了改變這種局面，保護傳統(tǒng)民族文化——漢字，我校學生會提出以下倡議：

1.減少課外上網(wǎng)時間，多讀書；

2.養(yǎng)成每天記日記的好習慣，練習書寫；

3.少發(fā)電子郵件，盡量動手給親朋好友寫書信。

請你根據(jù)以上內(nèi)容，代表學生會寫一封英文倡議書。

注意：1、開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。 2、詞數(shù)：100左右。

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Let’s take action now!

Answer 1

【答案】Dear friends,

In recent years, many of us spend a lot of time on the Internet with its popularity. As a result, we don’t write as well as we did in the past. In order to protect our Chinese characters and improve our handwriting, we’d like to offer some suggestions:

We should spend less time online so that we can have more time to read books. We’d better form the habit of keeping diaries every day to practice handwriting. Besides, it is better to write letters to our relatives and friends by hand rather than send e-mails.

As the saying goes, “The style is the man.” Beautiful and neat handwriting is beneficial to us students. So please pay more attention to our handwriting in the future.

Let’s take action now!

【解析】這是一篇提綱類作文。文章內(nèi)容要點已經(jīng)給出，考生在寫這篇文章時，要注意以下幾點：

1.通篇以一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)為主。

2.要點要齊全，但不要對要點簡單的羅列；要適當?shù)剡\用一些連接詞，使上下文行文流暢，銜接自然。

3.注意語氣；本文是一篇倡導書，內(nèi)容多為建議，注意句子格式。

【范文亮點】

1. In order to protect our Chinese characters and improve our handwriting, we’d like to offer some suggestions: In order to 目的狀語

2.文章中引用名言“As the saying goes, “The style is the man.” Beautiful and neat handwriting is beneficial to us students.”來強調(diào)說明漢字書寫對學生和所有人們的重要性，具有極強的建議性，使文章內(nèi)容更充實。

3.文章中運用了“as a result結(jié)果”“as well as 并且，和”“in order to為了…”“pay attention to集中注意力于…”等高分詞組。