Question

【題目】閱讀下面短文, 根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫,使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。

It was a peaceful night. I was sleeping with my brothers, feeling warm and comfortable. Mama was sleeping nearby, covered by snow. Papa was somewhere nearby, watching over us. There was a bright moon and we had all had a good meal of venison (鹿肉) Papa had caught earlier.

“Uncle Louis is coming”, Papa said. We loved Uncle Louis. He was a funny wolf, and always had interesting things to tell us and show us.

A little while later, Uncle Louis appeared. We did not approach him with respect the way we approached Papa. We flew at him, jumped all over him, and rolled him in the snow. Uncle Louis laughed and patted us with his paws. He is black all over, with yellow eyes, and he is very tall.

“It's the longest night of the year” , Uncle Louis said, “Does everyone feel like taking a run through the woods? I want to show you something unusual.”

Hearing that, Papa warned that it was dangerous to go near that pack of humans who lived in the woods.

“They are hardly dangerous”, Uncle Louis laughed, “They are so clumsy and make so much noise. They are not able to get near us--or even see us if we don't want them to. Besides, this is their special night. They are quite peaceful and won't be bothering about wolves.”

“Oh, please, Papa, let us run through the woods with Uncle Louis and see something unusual! “ We all begged.

“It is a fine night”, Papa smiled, “I must admit, I do feel like running.”

注意:

1. 所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為 150 左右；

2. 至少使用 5 個短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；

3. 續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；

4. 續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。

Paragraph 1

And we were off, all of us, heading towards the woods.

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Paragraph 2

We stopped and sat on a hillside and below us was the humans’ place.

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Answer 1

【答案】Paragraph 1

And we were off, all of us, heading towards the woods. It was almost midnight. The snow felt crispy and crunchy under our feet. The moon shone silver on my brother's fur, and the stars were as bright as diamonds. As we dashed through the woods, we breathed the cold air deep into our lungs, feeling refreshed. With Papa and Uncle Louis leading the way, I felt strong and light as though I could run forever. Then we smelled something nice.

Paragraph 2

We stopped and sat on a hillside and below us was the humans' place. It was the first time my brothers and I had ever approached those wooden things, which, according to Uncle Louis, were made by putting pieces of wood together. We didn't see any humans, but we could hear them singing together inside the wooden things with warm light shining out through the holes. It was peaceful. I thought, “Even if they are dangerous, they are animals, just like we are.” Then we threw back our heads and sitting on the hillside above the place where the humans live, we wolves sang, too, on this unusual night.

【解析】

這是一篇讀后續(xù)寫作文。

通過閱讀所給文章可知，文章記敘了作者是一只小狼，一個寧靜的夜晚，Louis叔叔來到了他們家，并提議去樹林里跑一跑，有人提醒他們住在樹林里的人很危險，Louis叔叔告訴他們?nèi)祟惒⒉皇俏ｋU，于是他們往樹林走去。

續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，第一段開頭是：我們所有人都出發(fā)了，向樹林走去。所以后文應(yīng)該是講述他們進(jìn)入樹林后的情況，在爸爸和Louis叔叔的帶領(lǐng)下，作者感到強(qiáng)壯和輕松，仿佛可以永遠(yuǎn)奔跑下去。第二段開頭是：我們停了下來，坐在山坡上，下面是人類的地盤。本段應(yīng)該寫他們在山坡上看到的東西，他們聽到人類在木屋里唱歌，溫暖的光線從洞里照射出來。在這個不尋常的夜晚，他們也唱了起來。

續(xù)寫時要求使用5個以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語增加了寫作難度，我們要熟悉所給劃線詞語，恰當(dāng)?shù)臅r候加以運(yùn)用。最后還要注意所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。按要求完成寫作任務(wù)。