【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)

隨著網(wǎng)絡(luò)的普及,越來(lái)越多的中學(xué)生上網(wǎng)交友。某英語(yǔ)報(bào)社就“Should students make friends online?”這個(gè)主題進(jìn)行了征文大賽。 請(qǐng)你給該報(bào)社投稿。

內(nèi)容要點(diǎn):1.網(wǎng)上交友優(yōu)點(diǎn):(輕松交友,暢所欲言,幫助學(xué)外語(yǔ))

2.網(wǎng)上交友弊端:(浪費(fèi)時(shí)間,分散精力,有時(shí)會(huì)上當(dāng)受騙)

3.你自己的看法。

要求:1.詞數(shù)120 字左右;(開(kāi)頭已給,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))

2.內(nèi)容充實(shí), 結(jié)構(gòu)完整,語(yǔ)句連貫。

Should Students Make Friends Online?

Whatever your age is , the Internet is a great place to hang out, where you can not only have fun but also make friends.

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【答案】

Should Students Make Friends Online?

Whatever your age is , the Internet is a great place to hang out, where you can not only have fun but also make friends.

The advantage of making friends online is that students can express their feelings and opinions more freely . Thus they can also ease their anxiety from their studies . At the same time /In the meanwhile ,it can be helpful for them to communicate in English which can be beneficial to their foreign languages studies.

However ,each coin has two sides. Making friends online can no doubt waste much of their precious time ,which should be spent more meaningfully on study. Besides , some even get cheated online without caution.

In my opinion, students should bury themselves into their study . As for friendship, students can readily find it among their familiar people around them.

【解析】試題分析:隨著網(wǎng)絡(luò)的普及,越來(lái)越多的中學(xué)生上網(wǎng)交友。某英語(yǔ)報(bào)社就“Should students make friends online?”這個(gè)主題進(jìn)行了征文大賽。 請(qǐng)你給該報(bào)社投稿。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn):1.網(wǎng)上交友優(yōu)點(diǎn):(輕松交友,暢所欲言,幫助學(xué)外語(yǔ))2.網(wǎng)上交友弊端:(浪費(fèi)時(shí)間,分散精力,有時(shí)會(huì)上當(dāng)受騙)3.你自己的看法。

這是一篇明顯的提綱作文,就是把文章的情景和內(nèi)容要求分成塊,以條目的形式列出以進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作。考生在審題的時(shí)候應(yīng)該注意審要求、審文體、審人稱、審時(shí)態(tài)。題文已經(jīng)告知要求,那么文體應(yīng)為書(shū)信文體,即介紹主要行程;又根據(jù)“你給該報(bào)社投稿 寫(xiě)作時(shí)即用第一人稱“我”;時(shí)態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)即可或一般將來(lái)時(shí)?忌趯(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)該選擇自己最熟悉、最有把握的詞語(yǔ)、句型,將要點(diǎn)逐條表達(dá)出來(lái)。表達(dá)時(shí)應(yīng)該綜合運(yùn)用所掌握的知識(shí),避開(kāi)生僻的詞匯,并克服母語(yǔ)的干擾,按照英語(yǔ)的習(xí)慣方式,用地道的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái),力求做到語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確無(wú)誤。然后根據(jù)要點(diǎn)選詞組句,然后按照篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連句成篇。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文語(yǔ)言凝練,論點(diǎn)鮮明,條理層次清晰。文章第二段網(wǎng)上交友的優(yōu)點(diǎn)。第網(wǎng)上交友的確定,第四段自己的看法。文章使用了which引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句which can be beneficial to their foreign languages studies.(這對(duì)他們的外語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)很有益)和which should be spent more meaningfully on study(應(yīng)該更多地花費(fèi)在學(xué)習(xí)上的);動(dòng)詞的ing形式作主語(yǔ)Making friends online(網(wǎng)上交友)。高級(jí)詞匯和短語(yǔ)as for至于,however盡管如此,besides而且。最后一句使用As for friendship, students can readily find it among their familiar people around them至于友誼,學(xué)生們樂(lè)意在他們熟悉的人中找到友誼,作者有力地支持了自己的觀點(diǎn),給文章一個(gè)完美的結(jié)束。

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