假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一 個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧) ,并在其 下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\) 劃掉。

修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫 出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

    2. 只充許修改10處，多者(從第11處起) 不計(jì)分。

     Sitting for long periods of time can cause so many negative health effects as smoking. Here is some simple ways sit less that you can try. First,choosing a task that involves standing,that can help you sit less during the day. Second,eat one meal the day while standing. Standing while eating doesn’ t mean you have to eat quickly or make poorly food choices. You can still enjoy a meal while on your foot just as well as in a chair. Finally,push your chair to the side of your desk each night. Your chair’s usual position can remind you to stand for a bit of longer in the morning.

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一 個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧) ,并在其 下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\) 劃掉。

修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫 出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

    2. 只充許修改10處，多者(從第11處起) 不計(jì)分。

    Humorous and positive,Mr. Ford was a awesome teacher when I was in the 5th grade. He always made everyone happier. If you ever felt down,and he was the one to go to. Always looked at the bright side of things,Mr. Ford motivated us student to do our best. They often played games and learned a lot too. He really makes my 5th grade year one of the best years of my school life. Mr. Ford treated us the best years of my school life. Mr. Ford treated us as friends instead as kids. Of all the teachers whom have taught me,I’ve never seen anyone who is as patiently as Mr. Ford. I will never forget him.

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一 個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧) ,并在其 下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\) 劃掉。

修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫 出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

    2. 只充許修改10處，多者(從第11處起) 不計(jì)分。

    This afternoon I walked into a small store just for quick look. There I find a little girl holding a large colorful toy. She eager asked her father to buy it to her. However,her father said no to him because he couldn’t afford it,though it would cost him only 20 yuan. Disappointed although she was,the girl was accepted her father's decision. When the father went to the other end of the store to look at something,I asked him that I could buy the toy and give it to his daughter. He looked surprising for a few minute but eventually agreed. I did what I had promised and then left the store.

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一 個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧) ,并在其 下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\) 劃掉。

修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫 出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

    2. 只充許修改10處，多者(從第11處起) 不計(jì)分。

    As we all know it,a hero is someone who have courage and is not afraid to help out. There are many hero in our society such as police officers and firefighters. My hero is my grandfather,which is hardworking,smart,inspired and full of energy. He retires from a company two months ago and now works as editor in a newspaper office. He still works hardly in his old age. My grandfather doesn’t give up easily. He often says, “I will do that I can to contribute to my family and society." In my opinion,our grandfather is really a man whom I should learn from.

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一 個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧) ,并在其 下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\) 劃掉。

修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫 出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只充許修改10處，多者(從第11處起) 不計(jì)分。

    The girl I will always remember her is Mary,who was my classmate seven year ago. She was ： quiet,always greeted the teachers at our school and never spoke ill anyone. At that time,all the kids in my class included me were impolite,never listening to the teachers. Therefore,Mary was always so polite. One day I asked her what she wasn’ t like the rest of us so what she told me changed the way I acted. She said,uIf you ever want to be respectful in life,you have to respect others." Heard what she said,I started respecting others more and telling another people what I had been told.

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一 個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧) ,并在其 下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\) 劃掉。

修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫 出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只充許修改10處，多者(從第11處起) 不計(jì)分。

     Happy isn’ t always connected with money. It goes hand in hand with a positive attitude to life. It is known to us that attitude is everything. The long I live,the more 

I realized the effect attitude has on our life. On my view,attitude is more important than facts or the past,that we cannot change. The only thing we can do is take in a positive attitude. After all,a positive attitude to life is necessary unless you want to be happy. I am convincing that we are in charge of our attitudes. And so life is 10 percent what happen to me and 90 percent I react to it.

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一 個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧) ,并在其 下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\) 劃掉。

修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫 出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只充許修改10處，多者(從第11處起) 不計(jì)分。

    I live in a quiet neighborhood,that there lives an old lady who always waves to everyone and greets them with a smile. She is such friendly a lady that she is popular with all the people around her. One Sunday morning last year,I found an old lady removing the weeds in his yard alone. I knew about she lived alone then,so I decided give her a hand.

While we were working there,other two girls joined in. After finishing remove the weeds,the old lady invited us to her house for coffee. We didn’ t want to disturb her,so we thanked her and leave. After all,helping the old are a virtue.

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一 個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧) ,并在其 下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\) 劃掉。

修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫 出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只充許修改10處，多者(從第11處起) 不計(jì)分。

   When I was 8 ,I caught a disease naming ADD. which led to me having trouble concentrating. I don't realize how bad it was until early middle school. I noticed I couldn’t focus in my lessons. Obviously,I fell farther behind in my studies. One of my classmate even told me I would never get out of high school. I told me the only thing I could do was try as hard as possible. With the help of my teachers try as hard as possible. With the help of my teachers and classmates,T ve made a great progress and becoming a top student. I am a senior this year and ready to graduate from high school. I’m writing this story tell people you can be great at anything unless you work hard.

Lori: I have a lot of business English students and a lot of times we end up 1. (talk) about what leads to success,and 2. is interesting that many of them mention luck.

Mike: People can make their own luck. What people regard 3. being lucky,you can actually create to a degree.

Lori: Right. Luck is down to how you respond to the 4. (opportunity) that come your way.Was 5. any other point you thought was particularly interesting?

Mike: Yes. Many think that talent is something that you have to have to be 6. (success) .In my opinion,if you want to be good at something,talent helps but at 7. end of the day hard work is what you do.

Lori: I agree. And another interesting thing is passion (熱愛) . If people love the things they do,they,re going to work harder 一 and the funny thing is that if you do so,the money kind of comes 8. (automatic) .

Mike: And when you love 9. you’ re doing,hard work doesn’t seem like hard work.

Lori: Yeah,and you also have to be prepared for all kinds of problems 10.get in your way. If you give up when things get tough,you will never succeed.

Jack: Keep your 1. (eye) on the road!Look where you,re going.

Rose: Why 2. (exact) am I driving the car?

Jack: I’m just going to take a back seat today. You carry on. I will watch.

Rose: Take a back seat? So you’ re going to let 3. (I) take control 一 do all the work 一 while you sit there and watch? 4. this mean you' re just being lazy?

Jack: Of course not. It just means i’m letting you have a turn at being 5 , charge — I trust you. What are you doing?!

Rose: Letting you take 6. break while I show you my driving skills!

Jack: Rose!Watch 7. forthatroundabout —and that traffic light... aren’t you driving a bit fast?

Rose: Jack 一 don’t be such a back seat driver!

Jack: A what?

Rose: A back seat driver is someone 8.offers unwanted advice. Just like you,telling the driver how 9. (drive) .

Jack: But you are going really fast 一 can I take the front seat now?

Rose: Stay 10. you are!